Your writing about dreams is very uplifting. I like how you have used different similies to describe the beauty of your dream experience. Dreaming gives our imagination a chance to fly!
Looking forward to your next piece of writing! Feel free to check in online tomorrow (1st April) at 10am for a Team 5 GOOGLE Meet - go to our main learning page for the links!
Kia ora Naomi,
ReplyDeleteYour writing about dreams is very uplifting. I like how you have used different similies to describe the beauty of your dream experience. Dreaming gives our imagination a chance to fly!
Looking forward to your next piece of writing! Feel free to check in online tomorrow (1st April) at 10am for a Team 5 GOOGLE Meet - go to our main learning page for the links!
Take care Naomi - stay safe!
Ms. Tapuke